Friday, November 23, 2007

The Challenge I Didn’t Have

By Shuke Wang


My stomach is gurgling. After recess, I would have a math test, which I didn’t study for. I was wishing that the bell would never ring, but my best friend Vanessa studied so hard that she was actually eager. She dragged me to the door to get in early, but I pulled away. Vanessa’s black silky hair fell in to her eyes as she tried to grab e again, retracing her steps. I suddenly saw a pool of colour on the brick walls and raced towards it without thinking. The next thing I knew, I felt pain on my head.

I looked up and saw a colourful blur. It became much clearer, a few seconds later. I suddenly saw a weird little creature with soft black hair, standing by the side of an orange track, blowing a whistle. Beside the creature was a blue rectangle. It was numbered and divided in to five slots. Suddenly, the slots burst open and! Horses galloped out with unequipped riders on their backs. I looked in horror as a horse flew out of its main track and jumped over another horse. The riders though, were so comfy. I forced myself to cheer but nothing came out. A girl had bits of blond hair flying out of her cap. She then disappeared as a rainbow shone through her. The others faded too, but even after that, they were leaving me filled with grace.

I was annoyingly disturbed by a cute green critter standing at my side. I looked at the cute useless rabbit but to my surprise, it spoke greedily.

“Get over there!” The rabbit shouted. I followed him to the five blue slots and he shut me in one of them. “You shift is next!” He hollered at me. I saw a flash of greed in his eyes. I felt entirely nervous. What was happening? I heard noises outside, and angry twitching under me. I was sitting on a horse! I looked out the window and saw a person cross the finish line. She had brown auburn hair. She cheered once, and disappeared as a colourful rain bow shone through her.

From through the window of my slot, I looked at the successful riders feeding their horses hay and mounting up on different ones. The pain in my head was unbearable, but my attention was glued on the “thing” that I was sitting on. It grunted and snorted impatiently. That was when I felt scared. I was on a horse! I had went horse back riding before, but unequipped and inexperienced? It was terrifying! Before I noticed the whistle blow, the slot banged open, and my horse burst out. It had a wild dark mane, and crazy but dark glossy brown fur. I felt a jolt of warmth rise over my whole head, and even so unequipped, I felt comforted. The hose sprinted back and tripped, and I was about to use the long white whip which I noticed was in my hand, but I saw the look of fright in its eyes, and I paused, throwing the whip to a side. The hose regained its’ strength and ran swiftly ahead, feeling trust on me to give it a chance. With the pain still in my head, I managed a weak smile as I finished in second place. The hose I was sitting on, gleamed at me with its’ faithful eyes, showing me a look I would never forget. I also saw the greed in the creatures eyes disappear. The next second, I blinked, and everything faded away.

“Hey Shuke! Are you okay?” Vanessa asked me. I rubbed my eyes cordially, and generously said: “I’m okay. Has the bell ringed yet?”

“Not yet.” Vanessa answered. “Don’t worry. You’ll do great!” She stuck out her hand and pulled me to my feet.

“Great!” I stated slyly. “I can wait. Vanessa was dumfounded. I shrugged. The pain was still on my head, but this daydream gave me courage to try new things and do your best, even when tasks are hard. This dream gave me the confidence, and I will of course use it. This was one big challenge I didn’t have!

Thursday, October 25, 2007

Mystery of the Missing Horse

By Shuke Wang

“Come on lets go!” hustled Pondra impatiently. Tina looked up and gave Pondra the angry stare, unaware that Pondras’ mother was staring at her. Tina and her best friend Pondra were on their way to Stallion Stables for a week. Tina’s cousin Laurie and her parents lived there. Pondra gave a hard shove at Tina and she finally stood up and started making way out of the bus. She watched from a distance as Pondras’ mother scolded her. She talked back in a loud rude voice which made all the passengers stare. Her mother hushed her angrily and nearly ran out of the bus.

“And you said I was the slowpoke.” Tina teased as Pondra caught up with her.

“Can you please be quiet and mind your own business? Pondra cried unhappily. Tina shrugged and walked into the dessert-like valley with a pale face. She couldn’t blame Pondra for being such a sourpuss. Her parents just divorced, her favorite cousin accused her of being not traditional to Russia, and her sister Aley and her big brother Andrew teamed up and insisted that she should be cut out from the family. And to make it worse, Pondra was forced to come here by her mother and she even had to pay the cost of her four hundred dollars for this trip. Her dog was sold by her dad and her mother was living in a dull and old apartment while her dad was living a luxuries life in Mexico with a new wife. Her mother suggested that she would feel better when she came here, but Tina doubts that her friend would actually like her trip. Pondra used to have a good life in Florida and her dreams all included the cost. Out here, it would be nothing but country music and solar power. Tina liked it, but she knew that it would be a low percentage for Pondra. Suddenly, Pondra broke into her thoughts.

“Is that the ranch? It’s so cool and it’s like, big and I hope the horses are well trained!” Pondra gushed, running ahead of Tina. Tina ran to her puzzled. This was more than she had expected. She immediately ran into the stable where they kept the horses. Laurie wouldn’t mind. She tried to remember the names of the horses that Laurie had shown her in the photographs.

“Hmmmm. Lightning, EBay, Brownie, Clay, Chinook, Windy, Shelby, Abigail, Dandruff, Patchy, and -.” Two other horses were munching hay at the end of the stall. One had a brown blotch on its back and it had a golden mane and peach colored fur. The other one was pure brown and it tossed its dark mane into the air. It was so silky the way it moved gracefully. But it was so strong looking like it was about to race out of the stable yard at any second.

“The brown one is Tokyoadajk and the other one is Chiklimonm.”

“Huh?” Tina looked up and saw her Cousin Laurie standing at the door way with Pondra behind her. “Laurie!” Tina cried and immediately ran over to her and hugged her. Laurie smiled and and motioned for her to let go. “So where did you get them?” Tina asked happily.

“Oh we caught them in our last trip to Wyoming.” Laurie said. “Two Wyoming man named them.” She shrugged. “I caught the brown one but it was like he caught up with me.” She laughed. But then her face turned serious. “The people in Wyoming say that Tokyoadajk is worth fifty thousand dollars if we’re going to sell him. Someone would want to steal it if they found out so don’t tell anybody.” Tina nodded and looked at Pondra. She was pondering on the horses intensely. Tina nodded. She was glad that she was not still on the bus being treated like a pile of dirt by Pondra.

“Oh you have grown so tall Laurie low!” Pondra’s mother cooed. Pondras’ face turned bright red. She glared at her mother. Pondra hated when her mother babied people, especially sixteen year- olds.

“Oh stop that! Mother, you should greet her in a more mature way!” Pondra said coldly.

“Oh sorry my daughter is just so frustrate-

“Don’t worry Mrs. Wellston.” Laurie cut in. “I really don’t mind. Pondras’ mother smiled at Laurie warmly and sighed. Tina caught her sort of scolding Pondra. “So I’ll show you your rooms shouldn’t I? Why how rude I have been, that I even forgot about how tired you were after your long journey. Come inside and let me get you some food.” Laurie stated slyly in a polite parental voice.

“Well, you really have grown up!” Mrs. Wellington sighed. “Only if Pondra was like you. Pondra! You should learn to act like Ms. Gent here.”

“Maybe if I didn’t have such a ruined life, I would!” Pondra nearly shouted. Her face was suddenly very pale, and tears were on the tip of her eyes. She blinked them back and made a fake smile. She sucked her lips inside her mouth and turned with her back facing everyone. Tina knew that this was the sign of a huge fight with her mother. But instead, she started walking towards the house. “Well why is everybody still standing here?” She muttered, close to weeping a river. “Ms. Gent just said we could go in.” Pondras’ mother looked at Laurie sensitively.

“My daughter is just having a hard time getting along. And as long as I want to deny this, I can’t. Pondra does have a ruined life and it’s the pity for me. Every problem for her is supposed to be my problem. She thinks that I ruined her life because I divorced with her fraud and unfaithful father. I’m sorry to express myself with these unacceptable words!”

“I’m fine with it.” Laurie shrugged. She thinks that Mrs. Willington is too dramatic, Tina thought. When they got inside, Tina whispered to herself a camp song:

“This day starts off badly and then it gets worse. My mother loses her pure silver purse. My friends too upset to play hide and seek. My dad has a secret and he won’t let me peek.”

Where is Tokyoadajk? Chapter 2

“Tina! Come, I need your help!” Laurie cried in Tina’s ear at six in the morning. Tina opened her eyes’ and yawned cordially.

“What’s up Laurie?” Tina asked. She jumped out of bed and looked at herself in the mirror. Her brown fluffy hair faded in the dim light and her blue eyes had circles under them. “Why’d you have to wake me up?” Tina mumbled. Laurie stared at her miserably.

“I can’t find Tokyoadajk!” Laurie sobbed. “I went to feed him at three thirty and I locked the gates, I remember. I forgot that I hadn’t changed the water so at four, I went back with a bucket of water but he wasn’t there.”

“Why do horse people always have to wake up so early?” Tina asked lazily. “Let’s go downstairs to talk about it.”

“No!” Laurie shouted. Then she broke into sniffs. She straightened herself and stopped sobbing. “The gates were closed and the tray of food was knocked over when he disappeared.” Laurie said frowning. “I was wondering if he could actually jump that high.” Tina shook her head in huge disagreement.

Wyoming horses don’t have the skills to jump right after they’re brought to human.” Tina muttered. “They can only run fast enough.” Laurie looked at her in a terrified expression.

“Was he stolen? Laurie asked solemnly. Tina paused for a second. She shrugged and flopped back onto her bed.

“Does anyone else know the cost of this horse?” Tina asked.

“Well, my parents do and some of my best friends know, but trust me. They don’t mean any harm.” Laurie cried. At the exact moment, Laurie’s parents came upstairs.

“We’re watching some early TV!” Laurie’s mother sighed. “Want to come?” Laurie and Tina both nodded and got dressed. Ten minutes later, they were all downstairs eating pancakes and watching channels.

“Hello this is Jessica Baker on news channel I am here to discuss the big prank pulled on many horse ranches this season.” The woman said smoothly. “A released criminal started releasing horses on many towns and may we warn you to lock your ranches responsibly until we recapture the criminal. I am reporting from California and tonight’s awarded singer is Kelly Clarkson’s ‘Miss independent’ so please enjoy your day!” The woman walked out of view and loud booming music started ringing out of the volume as the news center displayed the weather estimations.

“I know that song, I love it!” Pondra shouted. Tina nodded and began talking to Pondra about recommended singers. She saw a glimmer of excitement in Pondras’ eyes and she knew that Pondra finally liked the stay. “So when are we going horseback riding?” Pondra asked.

“When something happens,” Laurie answered silently “We’ll be able to go.” Tina knew that Laurie meant finding her favorite horse. She grabbed onto her sweater and rushed outside. She scanned every corner of the barn and found nothing. Suddenly, something caught her eye that was in the food bucket. Slanted over the edge of the bucket handles was a prune shaped metal seed that was the size of an eye. It had smoke rising from the end and it caused the foods to turn into a very pale rose color. She showed Laurie and she looked at it intensely. After a while, Laurie quivered.

“Stop helping me.” Laurie sighed. Tina looked at her, slightly puzzled. With her hands still on the object, Laurie stood up. “This, my friend,” Laurie explained “Is a grenade.

The Deadly Game chapter 3

Sunday, October 14, 2007

The Swamp Cat (5)

By Shuke Wang


Chapter 5

“Wake up sleepyhead!” Jakes’ mother yipped sarcastically knocking his head with her fist gently. Jake pushed her hand away and pulled on the covers. Finally, his mother left after a silent moment and he jumped out of bed changing into a pair of jeans and a sweatshirt. The whole family was there when he came and they were eating French toast and drinking milk. His stepfather was reading newspapers and his dad was talking to his step mom and shelly. Shari was cooking more toast for the family and Neige was sitting there silently reading his batman comic. Jake chose a seat with Neige.

“Neige! Talk to me?” Jake Begged. Neige looked up at him.

“Hi.” He said simply and went on reading his book. Jake stood up unconfidently and walked over to the kitchen counter to get toast. All the events raced through his head. He knew that someone was trying to talk to him and give him a signal but he couldn’t understand. Well’ he shouldn’t have been thinking of that. Without looking, he tripped over a chair and his plate flew out of his hands. Before Jake could get back up, he put his hand on to the stove and his hand was sizzled.

“Ahhhhhh!” He cried tumbling backwards. The plate hit the floor with a loud crack as Jake fell to the floor. Unfortunately, there was a telephone table behind him and he accidentally shoved a vase onto the floor. It hit the marbled surface with a loud crash before breaking into pieces. Jake was still falling backwards as he tumbled out the back door with a huge splash as his robe soaked into the water. Bubbles started forming around his sizzled hand and he felt heavier by every second. Using all his might, he lifted his head out of the water but then after catching a breath, he drifted back in, a loss from all the energy that he had. But he was still conscious. IT WAS PEACEFUL IN THE WATER AND HE CLOSED HIS EYES, HOPING THAT HE COULD KEEP HIS BREATH FOR LONGER. It felt like hours before he was pulled out of the pool. He immediately felt cold and started shivering.

“You okay?” asked his stepfather. Jake nodded. From the corner of his eyes he could see a kitten licking its paw, staring at him with a soft look.

“Look!” Jake shouted as he pointed his finger towards the kitty. But with a blink of an eye, the kitten was gone and all that was left of it was a puddle of water and a few hairs of a cat.

“I think we need to check your eyesight!” joked Jakes’ step dad. He handed Jake a towel and led him out of the pool. Suddenly, Jake stopped in his tracks. He knew it. The cat was trying to tell him about some secret with his real father. His father was doing something wrong and the cats wanted the truth revealed. After the necklace, the picture frame, and the note, he knew that something had to be done.

(To be continued)

Friday, October 12, 2007

The Swamp Cat (4)

By Shuke Wang


Chapter 4

“Why were you out there in the middle of the midnight?” Jake’s stepfather asked him the next morning. They were having pancakes and oatmeal. Jakes’ whole family was having a conversation about the pool incident last night. Jakes’ stepfather made a twisted confusing face and started jerking his head back and forth. Jake hid his giggle and pretended to cough.

“You know what?” He questioned. “I’m too sleepy to talk right now so see you later! I’m getting more sleep. Bye!” Jake ran upstairs with his cereal and dashed into his room. He started sorting through his magazines until he saw the “insane escape” It was a comic on a guy who escaped from and insane asylum and started killing people. Twelve victims had already died and the guy was planning on killing a car because he was so stupid. Jake laughed loudly as the oil came spilling out and the guy thought it was blood. Jake threw the comic back onto the floor and started zipping his backpack with sunscreen, a hat, and a towel. He packed the necklace he had found and hung it around his neck. Then he changed into his trunks and sneaked back outside into the pool. Dry vine leaves hung long and low onto the gate trying to avoid sunlight. The sun made the pool warm and sunny and old plants had shriveled into dry black clumps of compost. Shari was in her swimsuit already and was peaceful strokes in the pool.

“You’re supposed to be grounded!” Shari snickered. She jumped out of the pool and put on her towel, as Jake jumped in. The picture frame! Jake remembered the frame and he poked his head out of the water. It could be anywhere! He hoped that Shari didn’t find it. He climbed on to the pool railing in the water and pushed himself out of the pool. Jake simply found the frame behind the satellite plate where he left it. It was covered in dust and the light fringes were bent that it looked like a squashed peach. There was a piece of glass missing from the frame. Probably when Jake had tripped, the glass had shattered. Jake carefully put the frame in his bag and continued swimming for the whole afternoon. Neige came to sit on the patio for a few minutes, but left when Jake tried to talk to him. Shari was helping Mrs. Daken cook, and when it was four thirty, Jake came back inside soaking wet.

“We’re having roast beef and stuffed turkey with chicken soup and vegetarian pizza with celery that includes ranch sauce!” Shari blurted out. Jake licked his lips. Dinner would be awesome! When The Dakens and Shari had finished making dinner, Jake immediately sat on the enormous dining room table and dug right in. It was delicious. Shari even forgot to include that they made cheesy broccoli and garlic bread. The whole family sat there and complimented Mrs. Dakens cooking, while they ate. When it was nine, they had a walk and Jakes’ dad sent the kids to bed. Jake lie there unconsciously in his bed and then he heard a noise outside. Meow!! Jake froze. He slowly walked out of bed and glanced out the window. It was the same cat except instead of purring, it whined a haunting melody that Jake would never forget. He put on his damp robe and hurried outside. This time when he went, the kitty stayed in its position. As he cautiously approached it, he saw a red mark on the kittens paw. Blood. Jake picked up the kitten and stroked its soft fur.

“You poor kitty!” Jake sighed as he waked inside with it. He walked into the kitchen and took out a disinfect spray and two banded. Neatly, he did his job and took the kitty into his room. Then he got back downstairs and took out a basket covered in blankets. When he went back upstairs, the kitten was gone. Jake dug through his blanket and found something else. It looked like a court letter. He turned in his table lamp and looked at it.

Name: Tom Dakens

Crime: Freed seven dangerous cats into wild. Only caught six.

Description: Samantha. Color: Ginger. Features: White v on neck.

Fine: 3,000.

Due date: August 30.

Meet at Florida Beginners court.

Age:23

Crime rating: 3

Signature: Tom Dakens

Jake stared at the letter in disbelief. So instead of losing the kittens, his father had freed them on purpose. What a traitor! Jake sat there silently until the wind picked up its’ speed. He cautiously walked to the window and shut it hoping that the cat wouldn’t come. He felt like he was shocked but he made his second attempt and finally fell asleep.


(To be continued)

Thursday, October 11, 2007

The Swamp Cat (3)

By Shuke Wang


Chapter 3

Jake swam smoothly around the pool causing small ripples to form. Jake loved the pool. It had green sidelights under the water and the water was aqua blue, which made the pool look like a tropical juice. Jake looked at the misty gray swamp in the further blocks ahead of him. When he looked back in to the pool, it didn’t quite assuring anymore. It looked icy cold. Jake hid in the pool for awhile. Even just eight meters away from the house, Jake didn’t feel safe. He cautiously jumped out of the pool and started walking back. His walking turned to swift running and he did one thing wrong. He looked back, and gasped.

A huge gray cat hovered over him, showing all its bloody fangs. But it was as skinny as a stick. The cat yelped in pain and got ready to pounce. Jake dashed behind the huge satellite plates and lowered himself. He peeked around the curve of the satellite plate and the cat was gone. He couldn’t believe it. The gates had firm gripping and nothing could ever possibly go wrong. Nothing should have gone wrong. Nothing. Shivering coldly, Jake ran back inside. He decided not to tell his dads’ about the cat or the necklace. Instead, Jake asked for his real dad to think of a story that was true.

“Ok” Tom assured him rubbing his hands. “Well,” He started “I used to have seven cats. They were my precious fearless cats.” He said, shaking his head. “The names were Gloria, Hannah, Lero, Brown Butter, Shortcut, Russel, and Samantha.” Tom shook his head again. “Each of them had a necklace which had initials on them.” Tom added. “But my special babies slipped away when I wasn’t looking.” Tom sighed. “I miss them all.” He sniffed.

“I know how that feels.” Jake told his father. Neige seemed interested in the story but he said no more. Mrs. Daken finally told the kids to go to bed and sleep. They all had their own rooms and they felt comforted. I was midnight when Shari alerted Jake. They were sitting in Jakes bed talking about their stories.

“I don’t like how Neige is acting.” Shari commented. “He stopped talking to me this summer and he didn’t even come to my birthday last week.” Jake nodded.

“I know he’s acting strange Shari.” He muttered. “But no one knows why. Shari agreed and started pacing along the railway in Jakes’ room, used for hanging clothes.

“And don’t forget the fact that your dad barely talks to you unless you ask him a question or demand for a conversation.” Shari lingered. Jake reluctantly flipped onto his bed and fidgeted with the tiny vinyl laces on his pillow. He felt like something had been watching him all the way to Florida. Silently, Shari left the room and paced back outside. Jake lay his head motionless on his bed and quickly fell asleep.

MEOW! A quick noise woke Jake up at twelve. He bolted straight up and fluffed his pillow. Then he turned on his table lamp. His mouth was as dry as cotton and sweat poured onto his face. A sour stuffy smell filled the air and Jake could almost taste the irritating smell. Then he glanced out the window breathlessly. There was a tiny ginger-colored cat with little green eyes staring at him from the pool. Jake felt goose bumps go up his spine and he choked on his own breath. He felt dreadful. Without warning, he got out of his bed and tip toed downstairs, avoiding direct contact with the silver grey moon. Maybe I should go back upstairs and drift to a peaceful sleep again, Jake thought guiltily. But it was too late. He saw the cats’ eager gaze of hope and rushed out the backdoor, into the damp midnight air. The cat was gone. Jake nearly fell into the pool when he stepped exactly where the kitten had sat on. A limestone brick had flanged Jake into the pool. Quickly, he rushed out the pool, and climbed onto the cool brick floor. He could hear footsteps stomping their way to the backdoor. Jake was going to get grounded for life. He threw his wet robe on the floor and accidentally tripped over something. As his nose dug into the ground, he saw a tiny picture frame. His uncle was holding a kitty and the kitty was beaming at his owner. But there was something about that kitten. It was the exact same kitten that Jake had seen. Before he had time to lift his head up, he heard a voice. HELP US OLD ABANDONED CATS

WE’VE BEEN BITTEN BY ATHOUSAND GNATS

IT SEEMS TO US WE HAVE BEEN MAROONED

IF YOU DON’T HELP YOU’LL GET A WOUND.

And that was when Jake got caught.


(To be continued)

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

The Swamp Cat (2)

By Shuke Wang


Chapter 2

Jake lifted his head unconsciously. Then his eyes cleared out the dust.

“Jake, are you there?” It was Shari.

“Where were you?” Jake asked annoyed. “I was dead worried you know? You’re dangerous.”

“Huh?” Shari smirked. “Don’t you mean that I saved your life? You could have died you idiot! I mean like, a self-conscious boy lying in quicksand waiting to die.” Shari smirked again. Jake felt something cold against his hand. The necklace he thought. He just raised it and held it up to the setting sunlight. Shari just stared. Suddenly, it felt like the air was too stuffy, and Jake just stared intensely at the necklace. It was until then, he realized how beautiful the necklace was. It had a blue misty gem attached to a silver moon. Its rays gleamed in the sunlight and it kept getting stuffier in the air. There was another shape on the right side of the moon and it took Jake awhile to realize that it was the letter “s”. It dangled gently undrapping its silver chain on Jakes’ hand. Slowly, Jake put it back in to his pocket and he beamed. Shari was surely jealous.

“I’m going swimming.” Jake muttered and stalked home in his muddy jeans.


(To be continued)

She who wonders

By Shuke Wang

Tiny frost fringes formed around Lilacs’ scarf. She hung her head down low and heard the whips of snow and rain cackle down her cheeks. The gray sky hovered at her and thunder deeply cracked in to the valleys. The side walks were covered in slush and mud and Lilac had several of frozen areas’ on her feet and hands. She glared at the sky and trembled.

“Why does god get his anger in depths of his wonders? I shall not make another request if you summon your powers on a cheerful day like this if thy does not bring peace to me.” Suddenly, Lilac got a straight bolt of lightning shatter her in the back. She fell to the ground faintly and said her prayers before closing her eyes and falling in deep sleep. When she woke up, she seemed

to notice that the condition was still the same. But she felt the warmth of joy and her cheeks flushed into the normal color. She thought about all her twenty-one years of life and all her happiness. And her sadness and pain and how her parents had died in an accident. Of how god had to send them to a place that would take her long to go to. Lilac smiled warmly though. The rain and condition felt like nothing. The color of the sky turned bright blue and Lilac saw herself floating at last to see her family again. She wondered if she would ever make it to thy second life, though she was happy to go to a place with no fears and no worries. The sky would be blue forever and thy life would be joyful. She finally got to go. And till this day, it will be she who wonders, as she softly drifts away.

Wednesday, September 19, 2007

The Swamp Cat (1)

By Shuke Wang


It was not till 1895 till a careless owner freed 7 fierce cats in to the swamp to cause commotion. Then he dialed 911 and the cops came to trap the cats. They came back with only 6. But that’s where the story began. The owner married a beautiful girl named Shelly. One day when the owner was walking around, the last cat came to him begging for food. Sadly, the careless man kicked his cat in to the swamp and it was never to be seen again.

The husband and his wife had a child. He was a miracle. An A+ on every math test, gifted, and well known as popular. Little did he know that he would never forget the horrible “last vacation”. If you don’t want to be crying, it would be better to put this book down and go read something else happier. Only the bravest kids would survive this, and only the bravest ones would make the smartest moves like Jake’s.

Chapter one

Jake glanced out the window of his car seat. It was unfair. He didn’t have a good amount of time to finish his math project, and when he came back from school, he’d surely got in trouble. Everyone knew he was the smartest kid in the class, but his teacher Mr. Eagoa kept giving him harsh feedback, even on A’s. Jake knew that he had no choice because this was his last vacation before he would move all the way to California. His mom liked Canada, but his stepfather was reluctant to stay in Ontario. They did have stinky neighbors but so what? What about Jake’s happy life with his friends and his tire swing? What about the sunny days in Aurora every morning? Jake grumbled and buried his head in his sweatshirt. At least he was going to visit his real dad. Jake’s parents were divorced and he was living with his mom, but he really like his real dad's house. He and his new wife had a mega sized swimming pool and a mansion sized house with extra large bedrooms. It was awesome.

“Jake! You took my shoe, didn’t you?” Shari accused. Jake’s two friends Neige and shari had tagged along because they were endless about seeing Jake’s cousin, too. Neige was Jake’s best friend but he suddenly started to ignore Jake. And Shari- was a “girl”. Not a boy.

“Why would I take your shoe?” Jake asked bitterly. Shari was just too annoying.

“Tell me the truth Mr. Forcia!” Shari demanded. “Or off with your head!” Jake gave Shari a hard shove and she bumped in to Neige, who without warning, glared at Jake angrily.

Before Jake could say anything, his stepfather pulled the car around and edgy twist and stopped.

“We’re here!” He announced grandly. Then he frowned. “It stinks alright? It’s nearly as stinky as a swamp.” Then he smiled. “Oh, yeah! Mr. Daken lives in a swamp anyways. He probably farts a lot!”

His wife Shelly joined in with the laugh and motioned for Jake to join the laugh. Jake stared frustrated at his mother, and then his stepfather.

“He’s my real father you know?” Jake shouted angrily.

“And I’m your real stepfather! Did you know?” His stepfather giggled. His mother laughed even louder. With tears stinging his cheek, Jake opened the door and stomped outside, closer to his dad’s house. He hesitated for a few seconds and then knocked on the door. A woman with curly brown hair and dark musty-colored hair answered the door.

“Mrs. Daken!” Jake shouted excitedly. His stepmother smiled warmly. Her name used to be Ms. Feodo before she married Jake’s real father. He hated his stepfathers’ last name and would get really annoyed if Shari ever called him Mr. Focia.

“Where are your parents?” Mrs. Daken asked suspiciously.

“Well, they’re slowpokes.” Jake said casually. His stepmother nodded strangely and led him inside to his father.

“Oh! My darlingness boy has returned to save me from these lonely lifeless days. But with your prosperous kindness, you shall save me from thy evil mysterious cat!!” Jakes’ dad chanted eagerly.

“What cat?” Jake asked curiously. But his parents and his friends had already entered the building and Jakes father ran off to greet them.

“Umm…. Why Shelly? How come you have circles under your eyes?” Mr.Daken asked bitterly. Jake knew that his father was JUST TRYING TO MAKE Jakes mom look bad and feel unconfident. He saw his stepmother scowled at his dad. Surprisingly Jakes stepfather spoke so sternly.

“Now watch your mouth Tom.” Jakes stepfather demanded. Tom was Jakes real fathers name. With his head high in the air, Tom marched out of the room, upstairs. Jakes step dad and his mom stood there stunned as Ms. Daken apologized to them. Jake stood there too, shocked. Suddenly, he heard a slap fall on his shoulder and he grinned.

“Hey Shari!” He called, Lets go explore the swamp!” Jake challenged. Shari shrugged and walked out the door without anymore hesitations. Jake ran after her and started following her.

“Let’s walk over there!” Shari yelped.

“No!” Jake yelled coming after her. “It’s dangerous! My dad told me!” But it was too late. Shari had stepped into the muddy surface of the vinyl swamp. Jake stumbled after her and tripped in the mud. He was about to yell at Shari but then he saw a shiny speck buried in the mud two blocks away from him. He rumbled towards it and then wriggled the shiny thing through the mud. After Jake got out the main face, he tugged at the necklace and it slithered out like a snake.

“Hey look at what I found!” Jake cheered. There was no response. “Shari?” Jake began to worry. He stepped further into the soggy mud and peered behind himself. Jake took another step forward. This time, he was very wrong. He felt himself sing into the mud below. Oh no! Jake thought. He had left Shari hopelessly lost in a swamp. And yet, he wasn’t even old enough to die. Oh nooooo!!! Jake thought. He wasn’t even prepared to say good-bye yet.


(To be continued)

Monday, July 23, 2007

Story

By Shuke Wang

Now, now. You think that having a life is not so special and all that homework isn’t worth it. Your mom embarrassing in front of all your friends is such a drag. And you just hate your life when you spill soda on your favorite shoes. At least that doesn’t stain. But my theory stained. I mean-like you are lucky to have lived at least one hundred years. It’s lucky for me not to get shot before the age of death. That’s something that I encountered. The name’s Shuke. The story’s mine.

“Look at all this!” I heard my dad call from the dining room in the museum. My mom had died, so I really counted on my dad. Slowly, I walked over to the tearoom, where I was working for Carsone. As you see, Carsone was a manager of this famous museum in Ohio and I honored him a lot. Carsone always had a cherry mood. But today he had a bad mood. He still had blue eyes, a light tan, and chestnut colored hair. But today his eyes looked sad and miserable. As I bent my head down, my hands flew to my mouth .There on the floor were pieces of fancy glass, a red ripped fabric, and most of all, my little cousin Iddie, Standing on the floor with money in his hand.

“I got job.” Iddie stated proudly. “I got in trouble and got money.”

Thursday, June 28, 2007

On Challenge

By Kerr

Challenges That Improve Your Life

Have you seen anybody get themselves eager by a few illusion tricks so plain, or a formal life going fast forward in the TV screen? Well its pretty plain for those scenes to happen inexpertly on your regular daily intervals. And they still refuse to stop happening today. Sometimes you sort of feel regretful or useless for what you do, and many of those things could never be changed. These rueful feelings have a big disadvantage of health and heart, and almost everyone in this world has had it. Most kids have had this feeling in their childhood life, and it’s often unforgotten when they have time to clear their mind. Like if you were offered a great benefit which you denied on having, you’d spent the rest of your life thinking about your decision. Well, that is what we are here to talk about. Many psychologists just tell you to let it go and think of something else, but it’s not as easy as you thought. It is challenging.

A Big Problem

What pops in to your mind when you’re subconscious or sleepy? Do you think of happy things that you like to do? Or do you think of regular news and your worries? No one can change your mood but you. Now, the best way of not being guilty is to try to be very responsible so you feel free. But the worst someone can do to you is to have a serious conversation. (Or bite you, if it’s necessary.) You just have to get it over with. Because sometimes life can get miserable and crying does not help. Many men work overtime to get more money, but their families usually don’t grow out of this habit. A good solution of happiness is your family. The same blooded relatives that bring kindness to you, when you just had a great loss, and is in a lot of stress. But sometimes, they are the problem of the solution.

Friday, June 22, 2007

Why Quit

你知不知道,抽烟会致癌。你看一看这两个肺,黑的是抽了烟的肺,粉的是没有抽烟的肺。

Sunday, June 10, 2007

Mystery of the Stolen Gem

Now, now. You think that having a life is not so special and all that homework isn’t worth it. Your mom embarrassing in front of all your friends is such a drag. And you just hate your life when you spill soda on your favorite shoes. At least that doesn’t stain. But my theory stained. I mean-like you are lucky to have lived at least one hundred years. It’s lucky for me not to get shot before the age of death. That’s something that I encountered. The name’s Shuke. The story’s mine.

“Look at all this!” I heard my dad call from the dining room in the museum. My mom had died, so I really counted on my dad. Slowly, I walked over to the tearoom, where I was working for Carson. As you see, Carson was a manager of this famous museum in Ohio and I honored him a lot. Carson always had a cherry mood. But today he had a bad mood. He still had blue eyes, a light tan, and chestnut colored hair. But today his eyes looked sad and miserable. As I bent my head down, my hands flew to my mouth .There on the floor were pieces of fancy glass, a red ripped fabric, and most of all, my little cousin Eddie, Standing on the floor with money in his hand.
“I got job.” Eddie stated proudly. “I get in trouble and get money.
He chanted.
“Eddie,” I forced myself to say. “Who is paying you?” Eddie pointed to the doorway, and I saw a shadow. My father was a significant lawyer and yet he was prosperous, He could solve this by himself. But I could too. He just stood there as I rapidly chased after the thief. Boy, he was fast. I could only hear my footsteps thumping loudly against the floor. And I could barely see because I was running so fast that all I saw was a blur. As I raced sown to the main corridor, I could hear bumps and scratches. Then I hear a ripping sound and millions of small beads start shattering towards me when I reached the entrance I caught a glimpse of something shiny and sparkly. Like a diamond.
.Eddie And The Thief
I stared glumly as the sirens got louder and until all were surrounded people finally spoke
“I will find the thief!” he stated. But then Dexter came into the way. Well, let’s say I hate Dexter. He was always bragging about his goodness and his strength, yet he also tried to get me and my dad of our cases. Since Dexter was old, I started to forgive him and his grumpy mood. He used to be a miner so he had great power of forcing people to do what he wanted. But his force hardened when Melinda came in to his life. Melinda had perfect blond hair, shiny and curly, the fancy, lady mood, and the revengeful blue eyes, always looking sneaky and hateful. Dexter quickly fell in to her love trap and let no one in his heart, but her. Not even Eddie, his grandson. Poor Eddie had to be sent to an orphan school until I picked him up at eight each night. Eddie’s mom had died and his dad left him. Dexter had no interest in playing with Eddie either. Eddie was a charming boy, and I just couldn’t believe that he would help a thief stole a valuable crystal. But here’s some evidence. He left a note:
Deer hoevr stolidie,
Givem back r u no u wil pay.
Meetme 24:0lfred.purestreet. kid smine

What is this? I thought as I put the note in my pocket.

Suspiciousness

“This is Josh!” Carson explained. “He will be our security for quite a while.”
“What!” I shouted. The boss was giving my job to a total stranger.” We need to talk.” I muttered to Carson. As we went down the hall, I thought of how to express this painful feeling of being betrayed. Once we finally reached the restaurant, I ordered some fries to pass time. At last, it came out.
“HOW COULD YOU!”I cried. “I’ve been working for two months straight, and all I get is a stranger replacing my job!” Carson’s face became serious too. “You had us burglarized!” He accused, “You are not responsible!” At that moment, I burst out the door crying. Suddenly, I smiled; I know that I didn’t have to search for the clues. They would get to my.

FRIENDS

Bells and Shelli are sisters. Shelli was girly, and Bells was boyish, Shelli had good stuff. Perfect hair, and perfect skin. Bells had cool stuff. But they both were my friends. “Have you seen the latest style? Stella asked me, I smiled and nodded, Bells groaned at the sight of clothed, “let’s go get some lunch at the museum, I suggested even though I no longer worked there. It was just a magnet that was pulling me there. I just want the fries, I told myself at the entrance. Bells ran to the restaurant to save our seats, as I stared calmly at Josh. Suddenly, Eddie made a move. He grabbed Joshes hand.
“Daddy Alfred, where’s grandpa Dex?” I gasped. Now I understand what the note means.
Dear whoever stole Eddie,
Give him back or you know you will pay.
Meet me at 12:01 pure street.
Alfredo
So Alfredo was the father of Eddie. After he left Eddie, he was lonely, and came back for him. Alfredo realized that if Eddie was with him, he would be broke. So he stole the crystal to sell and got a job so he wouldn’t be framed. But then he probably found out that I now sort of owned him and so he left the note. It’s too late.
Alfredo aka Josh, now had a gun in his hand and the crystal on the other. He cornered us as he tried to tell Eddie why he was doing this. Finally, I took my chances. When his head was turned, I jumped on him, grabbing the crystal. It suddenly sizzled.
“HOT!” I screamed dropping the crystal. It hit the floor with a bang. Alfredo turned his gun towards me, furiously. At that moment, Bells came out of the restaurant. She was so scared that she threw the steaming hot fries at Alfredo. He got his bullets ready, but –
NNNNNNNNNEEERRRRROOOOOOOOO! The cops I shouted! Heavens sake!

The End
I hugged everyone that night. I was so thankful for everything. Getting my job, and not dying thanks for life! Thanks.

Monday, June 4, 2007

Heartbeat

I swear that here was something good inside my sister, we’ve went through horrible fights, bad reunions, and friendship disorder. It was either hate or dislike, and I know this was going to one get better. My cousin moved away. There was no one to accompany me, so I got Heartbeat, a little brown chestnut Labrador. She was caring and energetic, but also very obedient. I would tell her my worries, and she would pretended to swallow, as if she was absorbing my information, and when I asked her for advices, she would cock her head on one side, and think seriously. It would always make my laugh. We want on long joyful walks, and ate together in the front deck, which made me feel right at home. It was winter and my sister was coming over for the weekend. When she saw Heartbeat, her eyes softened and she played with the dog all day long. By mourning, she could not part with the dog. Since I gave Heartbeat walks in the mourning, my sister decided to come along and tell me about her job, the parties she’s been to, and news about her city, while she patted Heartbeat. Soon or later, she decided to stay. But after eight months, Heartbeat had a fatal brain tumor- she died. I and my sister both cried at this awful sight. But that night, my sister gave an old book that I’ve always wanted to read.

“I’ll miss you Heartbeat.” I said to myself that night as I lay in the bed. An intelligent dog I will never forget. I thought. Not only did I and my sister share Heartbeat’s heart,

But we also shared each others heart.

Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Lie From Thunder

By Shuke Wang (可儿作)

Ziziziii! As a few arrows hit a rock, the feeling of wind was blowing against Ragakap’s neck. The wise old turtle dashed away, awkwardly sighing.

“Missed again!” he giggled in relief. His giggle sounded real, but stiff and serious.

“Another time and I’ll die!” he coughed, suddenly feeling tired.

“Better than saying good-bye to your surroundings.” Leaperdo laughed. The tired turtle looked annoyingly at the spiky bushes and the small blueberry trees. The wind rapidly blew against the tall yellow grasses and sausage plants by the river.

“Bye, later, whatever!” Ragacap stated slyly staring at a drop of drew above him.

Too many humans were intruding the animals and plants habitat.

“We will need protection.” Snakeciol hissed.

“When beetles whisper while mice swim and when snakes don’t eat it’ll mean, time for protection.”

Suddenly, Thunder, who had electricity, stricken up hearing the conversation. Thunder himself was a self centered show off.

“I’m a great arch!” Thunder said proudly, even though he knew he could not aim properly. “I will aim my precious static at the bows, and they will not work.” “I will make huge scary noises and scare the people away.” And I will blind them with my eerie glow.” Thunder shouted.

“I can take care of the people myself!

“Okay” Ragakap sighed. “If you don’t step back and succeed, I will gift you with one of my special gifts.” “Thunder! We rely on you!”

Thunder nodded, but suddenly started to worry. When he did not need to work, he heard chants from the star.

Thunder, thunder,

You can lie,

If you want to, you can try.

But we warn you, you will cry.

Thunder, thunder,

Please don’t lie!

The voices chanted. But Thunder ignored them, so weeks passed by, and the hunting day had come. But Thunder still admitted that he was excellent.

Finally, ziziii! Arrows shot at random parts of the meadow. Thunder awoke hearing the dreadful sound of shouts. Immediately, he shot out handfuls of static. Slowly, the shouts got louder. Thunder thought he had done a good job. But he knew that he had not, because he heard angry taunts.

You have lost your static,

Turtles now walk slowly,

It’s all because of you,

And that’s why you’re now lonely.

Thunder was now desperate. He didn’t know what to do. It was too late to do anything. His punishment was to not get his static back, until turtles could run again. And he learned something that was suppose to be learned, when he was younger.

Never ever, ever lie!